tees is out now for sale :)

  • Decappuccino

    Negative space is a good thing. You don't need to cram every available space with something.
    Most of the elements in this are touching or over lapping each other, and its hard to figure out where you're supposed to be looking.

    The concept is also very typical and quite dull. Anchors, circles and "since ___" dates are super over done and just get plain boring.

    If I were you I would do a ton of research on spacing, negative space and contrast and start fresh.
    Try out this article (1-7), it helped me a ton: http://www.gomediazine.com/design-articles/technique-theory/rule-one-limit-your-fonts/

    Also, if you plan on asking questions here on Mintees, make sure you check the resources section before posting.
  • firstfridays

    Decappuccino said:Negative space is a good thing. You don't need to cram every available space with something.
    Most of the elements in this are touching or over lapping each other, and its hard to figure out where you're supposed to be looking.

    The concept is also very typical and quite dull. Anchors, circles and "since ___" dates are super over done and just get plain boring.

    If I were you I would do a ton of research on spacing, negative space and contrast and start fresh.
    Try out this article (1-7), it helped me a ton: http://www.gomediazine.com/design-articles/technique-theory/rule-one-limit-your-fonts/

    Also, if you plan on asking questions here on Mintees, make sure you check the resources section before posting.

    thank you for giving comment to me, and I will try to do better than this I may have errors .. bad here .. but I try my best, and the tshirt is already on sale .. :)

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