I tried uploading it got rejected so back to critique :/
5 colour design

  • oblivion^

    not sure why its good :) , 2 of mine got rejecteddid aswell oh well
  • Love Sick

    oblivion^ said:not sure why its good :) , 2 of mine got rejecteddid aswell oh well

    thanks I just don't know what to improve, I've took other artist's advice made the changes and still rejected, sucks :/
  • x Nau x

    I think that neck+this antique cloth thing on her neck is killing it.
    Maybe if you change that, also some lines dont have weight and need to be more bold. A classical frame around her would be nice.
    I hope this helps you.
  • Love Sick

    x Nau x said:I think that neck+this antique cloth thing on her neck is killing it.
    Maybe if you change that, also some lines dont have weight and need to be more bold. A classical frame around her would be nice.
    I hope this helps you.

    yeah helps allot thanks, I was a bit worried about the frame and line wieghts

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