read the resources on emptees about halftones.

i already read the post bout halftones in the resorces section. can you tell what i'm doing wrong with the halftones in my design?

thanks vinbasshred

I don't really use halftones a lot either blc it always looks better to me with strokes but I remember finding a tut on this site and it shows how you should select areas, give them gradients, and then apply filter>color halftone. This looks like you just applied it to the whole thing, so try that 1st, but I also think you're using too much of it. Only use it here and there and use cross hatching, thick and thin lines or other methods of shading to fill large areas.

i see i see, i try your suggestion. i'm gonna update the design here after i remake the highlight. thanx for your suggest mate.

you might want to redo the thumb, it just looks kind of odd

okay i'll try fix that thumb, thanx for input :)