Work in progress.

Ultimately gonna submit to the band.
if its refused then i'll sell it.

LOADS left to do, just wanted some critique

C&C welcome

  • MattisGentle

    Still need to finish touching up line work.

    keep that in mind when commenting :]
  • mikelopez

    Use Illustrator or something, because those lines look really rough.
  • I AM SCUMBAG

    yeah man, this is a great idea, and the direction is fantastic, but if its not finished, and not finalized, you risk someone else taking this idea from you and doing it ten tons better. my most humble suggestion would be: work it, finish it, show it off, send it with confidence, and be ready to fall back on plan B which is to resell it. who knows, they might dig this for the girly shirts. i've seen some random TDWP shirts, you never know. but insecurity and unfinished work is definitely not gonna get you anywhere man its just going to annoy most people.

    oh yes, and when you DO finish this, make it fill that shirt, theres too much interesting shit going on for it to take up that small part.

    love.
  • MattisGentle

    I AM SCUMBAG said: yeah man, this is a great idea, and the direction is fantastic, but if its not finished, and not finalized, you risk someone else taking this idea from you and doing it ten tons better. my most humble suggestion would be: work it, finish it, show it off, send it with confidence, and be ready to fall back on plan B which is to resell it. who knows, they might dig this for the girly shirts. i've seen some random TDWP shirts, you never know. but insecurity and unfinished work is definitely not gonna get you anywhere man its just going to annoy most people.

    oh yes, and when you DO finish this, make it fill that shirt, theres too much interesting shit going on for it to take up that small part.

    love.

    Thanks!

    I will keep this in mind and mayb just post teasers from now on instead of my whole design when its only just in raw like this.

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