Previous month's thread: http://mintees.com/talk/196933-graphic-work-july-2011

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Let's see it!
  • Jason Carne



  • Spence

    This was the last post in the other thread so I'm reposting it.

    First time doing a pattern like this. Not sure where I'm going with it.
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  • Adhesive Hippo

    Working on a poster for a benefit concert right now. Not really a fan of this but unsure of what more/less to do. Thoughts/critiques?

  • William Henry

    Adhesive Hippo said:Working on a poster for a benefit concert right now. Not really a fan of this but unsure of what more/less to do. Thoughts/critiques?


    The lighthouse graphic is fine, the text is just really uninspired.
  • enora

    Had fun with type and some Meshuggah lyrics.



    Adhesive Hippo said:Working on a poster for a benefit concert right now. Not really a fan of this but unsure of what more/less to do. Thoughts/critiques?


    I don't really like the lighthouse overlapping the text at the top. Also everything should be a bit more aligned, and it needs more room around the text (add some margin between the type and the edges ?) Well just my two cents :)
  • MattleGearSolid

    I love this show...

    Breaking Bad_respect1

    Breaking Bad_ Camper
  • Adhesive Hippo

    I like the bottom one a lot. I've heard great things about the show, although I haven't seen any episodes.
  • Smiths Canvas

    Threw this together last night for some fictional branding for Carnegie Steel Co. for a school thang. Came out pretty cool for only being around 2 hours.



  • RustyEight

    Smiths Canvas said:Threw this together last night for some fictional branding for Carnegie Steel Co. for a school thang. Came out pretty cool for only being around 2 hours.




    These are so incredible
  • deekin

    RustyEight said:
    Smiths Canvas said:Threw this together last night for some fictional branding for Carnegie Steel Co. for a school thang. Came out pretty cool for only being around 2 hours.




    These are so incredible
  • MattleGearSolid

    Adhesive Hippo said:I like the bottom one a lot. I've heard great things about the show, although I haven't seen any episodes.

    Thanks a bunch man, that's the one I'm more impressed with as well. And do yourself a favor and check the show out. I find myself knowing *or thinking I know* whats going to happen next, but it's still a fun ride watching it come to fruition.
  • bleet

    Some stuff i have been doing for the upcoming 2012 range
    http://www.prolimit.com/





  • RustyEight

    Playing with a new font.

  • scott_mcroy

    Nike Air Jordan Jordan Feature,
    full feature http://www.prodirectselect.com/articles/nike-air-jordan-basketball-shoes-trainers.aspx



    Onitsuka artwork.
  • x Nau x

  • RustyEight

    Not an original idea, but wanted to try it.

  • Jason Carne

  • MattleGearSolid

    ChemicalStormSub
  • PitchGrim

  • MattleGearSolid

    PitchGrim said:

    Big fan of this!
  • Betraydan



    Available over at PixelsDaily for download.
  • bmoore

  • Love Sick

    Untitled-1
  • theSkywatcher

    Submitted this to RIPT apparel for printing... Just a little fun project to go with the craziness of design work life. :)

  • deekin

    Finally finished this sucker, after months of being 'art directed'...
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    Came out nice though, IMHO.
    It's in the 'Tees' section.
  • Tom Neal

  • Craig Robson

    Tim said:

    just got denied and I have NO clue why. I mean its not the most original idea but how original can you go with a zombie theme?

    I'm not someone who bitches around when something got turned down but I feel like that this is good enough for this site since I saw so much crap got accepted.
    Anyone can give me a little crit on this one? Would love to know why this isnt good enough since I worked on it for hours.

    there is a feedback thread that might be more fruitful for a response.

    for me i just don't think its very special or interesting, the mirrored zombie head doesn't work for me and the concept isn't very strong, it either seems too messy in places or not messy enough in others, the eye-triangle seems like an easy way out and really stands out from the whole composition which makes it look jarring and odd. i like what you did with the face/mask on the lower half and i think that's the strongest part of the whole composition, mainly because it feels like its the only bit that hasn't taken the easy route. the type treatment also seems very rushed and not thoroughly considered.

    also, please stop saying things like "so much crap got accepted" it makes you seem like a spoiled child who has to say that he better than other people instead of dealing with the situation.
  • Adhesive Hippo

    ^yup. Frankly it's just not super appealing. Obviously zombies aren't going to look great but it doesn't look like something that should be approved. The textures are not great and it looks like a mess. I understand that you spend some serious time on it and are bummed it didn't get accepted, but it looks muddled, like a bunch of ok stuff got tossed in together.
  • Brendon Rush

    I'm working on a menu for the cafe I work at, just a simple 2 fold DL size, it's coming along quite nicely.







    Let me know what you think.
  • Eric Larson

    Betraydan said:

    Available over at PixelsDaily for download.

    I like this shit!
    deekin said:Finally finished this sucker, after months of being 'art directed'...
    Photobucket
    Came out nice though, IMHO.
    It's in the 'Tees' section.

    Greatness.
  • Adhesive Hippo

    Brendon Rush said:I'm working on a menu for the cafe I work at, just a simple 2 fold DL size, it's coming along quite nicely.







    Let me know what you think.

    Nice. I'd love to see a bit more of the green in the rest of the menu, maybe accenting the headers. And I think "Opening Hours" may look a bit better with Gotham rather than Wisdom Script. I think Wisdom looks odd when it's so small.
  • deekin

    A lil logo work for use on the rear cover of an album...
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  • Glenn

    deekin said:A lil logo work for use on the rear cover of an album...
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    The kerning could use some work. Especially the G of 'KING' doesn't seem the be a part of the word
  • Vokesy

    MattleGearSolid said:I love this show...

    Breaking Bad_respect1

    Breaking Bad_ Camper

    Seeing this made me download the entire 1-3 season and spend my weekend watching it :D
    goddamn that series is awesome.
  • deekin

    Glenn said:
    deekin said:A lil logo work for use on the rear cover of an album...
    Photobucket

    The kerning could use some work. Especially the G of 'KING' doesn't seem the be a part of the word

    I see what you are saying there. Fortunately it will only be like an inch or so when printed.
  • DrewGliever



    Not quite done, anyone have any ideas?
  • Smiths Canvas

    Lubalin tribute project for class.

  • deekin

    DrewGliever said:

    Not quite done, anyone have any ideas?

    Have the knife be dripping blood and the pen dripping ink, mixing together at the bottom.
    You could make em both black or do a red (blood) and black (ink) mix..
    You could even use this idea to execute some text underneath... Just an idea.
  • DrewGliever

    Hahah you're the third one (including me) to have the idea to make them drip, I'm gonna have to do that just to see what it looks like
  • MattleGearSolid

    Vokesy said:
    MattleGearSolid said:I love this show...

    Breaking Bad_respect1

    Breaking Bad_ Camper

    Seeing this made me download the entire 1-3 season and spend my weekend watching it :D
    goddamn that series is awesome.

    Ha! I'm glad, Deff. my Goal there. It's a great show!

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