This is one of my first projects. So,take it easy n me.. My lines are nt that goot,maybe because i use mouse or i just really suck at it. Anyway, This is IN MEMORY OF,the top concept metal of Bacolod City,Philippines. I just thought of doing one for them.

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PLEASE HELP. thanks.
  • xul1349

  • DanielAndHisArt

    Just paste the url when you would like to post an image sir -

    (here is what you were trying to post)

  • Obscure

    without even thinking about it to much, the IN MEMORY OF text needs to be hand drawn. the skulls in the background should be handrawn and maybe not mirrored.

    The colours are pretty harsh too.
  • Balefire

    The background is too elongated for me - it stretches the design too much vertically.
  • ThinkInkClothing

    DanielAndHisArt said:Just paste the url when you would like to post an image sir -

    (here is what you were trying to post)


    thank you for reposting it for me..

    THANK YOU GUYS. I wish there was something more that you could criticize my work. THE FONT is taken into consideration and the way i mirrored the skulls. The length of the background elongated the whole design. The contrast of the colors are too harsh. How would I improve this more?
  • Luke Tarrant

    xul1349 said:http://mintees.com/talk/194684-official-critiques-wanted-post

    there's no need to start a new thread, just post there like the rest of us.

    as for the design, I don't mind it, I'm not a fan of either type. longest feather is off at the tip. and I think you need something to blend in the own and the skulls because it looks too 'just whacked together' at the moment in my opinion
  • ClintAbyss

    few small things I would do first,

    make it shorter like this,
    do the lettering your self and use the same style for the top and the bottom, and the colors, I would stick to a few shades of gray, but loads of color arn't really my thing,
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  • ThinkInkClothing

    yeah, i was thinking the same thing too but i dont know what to do to blend in the owl and the skull.. any suggetstions? The font, yeah, i know.. ha!
  • ClintAbyss

    if you ad shading, and make it look like the owl is over the skull not flat it might help?
  • ThinkInkClothing

    ClintAbyss said:if you ad shading, and make it look like the owl is over the skull not flat it might help?

    YEAH! that might work.. nice! thanks man..
  • cynicdesign

    • The frame artwork is too obviously stretched horizontally. Don't do that.
    • I'm all for picking up where your inspiration left off, but this is a little too Hydro74 for my taste
    • Throw those skulls away and draw them yourself.
    • Take that font off of your computer.

    Hope that helps.
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